My 1st bedtime story

[Po_Ta_To]

Hmm I posted it again coz last time I did too many wrong grammar lol. I did this story for my friend to send her professor, she's a teacher. Hope you like it.

Once upon a time.. (yes, we always begin the story like this) there was a handsome Prince. Who was always sad. Why? It’s because he fell in love with a very nice and pretty girl but she left him and went to a place very far away. Since that time, he's not loved anyone. But his father the King, had another plan for him. The King sent messages to their neighbors to ask them to send their Princesses for the Prince to choose a bride.
Many Princesses come to meet him, fat, slim, beautiful, ugly, oh! We’ve even got the old Princess here? But the Prince wouldn't choose any of them. The King became very angry and shouted “If you'll not choose the bride by yourself, next time I’ll choose for you” Unfortunately, the servant of Dark Fairy heard that and quickly went back to tell his mistress. “Really? If I can make the king choose me I’ll be the next Queen and the handsome Prince will also be mine.” This sounds not so good, right?
The Dark Fairy turns herself into the one most beautiful Princess you ever seen. The King (of course)chooses her for his son and she moves in to the castle as the prince’s fiancé. But…the prince doesnt likes her. She never shows kindness, or smile's at someone’s silly jokes. She doesn’t like flowers or the singing birds or even the bright sky in the spring.
One day, the Prince rides his horse out of the castle. He just wants to escape to somewhere.
He rides very fast he doesnt see the girl walking besides the road. The horse runs very close to her and the clumsy girl panicked and dropped her apple basket. And…suddenly the horse stops and eats all her apples.
“Hey! Bad horse” the girl shouted “your horse ate all my apples.” “Now, I have to go back and pick them again.” Says the girl looking like she wants to cry. “I’ll help you. It’s my fault anyway” The Prince said. (Did I tell you he’s very kind prince?) He helped her all that afternoon and dropped her in front of her home. “Here’s my home, thank you for helping me today.” And then she kisses his cheek for thank you. The Prince likes her a lot, and he goes out to help her work everyday after that….
Ahhh…but happiness can’t go on so long. Someones bound to go to tell our Dark Princess and she’ll be very angry. She has to do something. She thinks and thinks and thinks…and got a bright, evil, idea. She begins to make the love potions so the prince will love her (Don’t ask me for the ingredients because I’ll not tell you.) And also hate potions for the girl.
When she's finished, she goes to the girl’s small village and turns herself into the old woman. “Pretty girl, can I have some water please? My old bones are so tired.” She asks the girl. “Sure ma’am, please come and rest in my little house.” The girl says with a smile on her face. “You’re very kind. As a thank you, I have something here for you.” “This is the love potion for you to use on anyone you want to loves you.” Dark Princess said and hands hate potion to the girl. “Oh! But I can’t accept that, it’s not good to accept something from you.”
The girl stepped forward and tries to push the potion bottle back to old woman. But as I told you, she’s a clumsy girl. She stepped on the woman’s long skirt and tripped over, the hate potion bottle dropped on the floor and broke. Potion spreads across the floor. “See what you did to My precious potion?” Dark Princess yelled angrily. “Now, it’s your time to pay for stealing my prince.” She stepped forward to the girl and begins to mumbles a curse.
“Stop that!!” Here! In comes the Prince. He pushes the Dark Princess to the side, and she hits the wall and love potion bottle in her bag was broken. Suddenly, something strange happens. The Dark Princess’s face turns red and she starts to cry. “ I’m sorry, I’m so sorry for what I tried to do with you two. I don’t know why I did such a bad thing.” Oh! Looks like the potion changed her.
The Prince and the girl take her back to the castle and tell the King everything. The Dark Fairy has turned back to her real appearance too. “This is the story, father. And I want to marry to this girl.” The Prince says. “Looks like you fianally made your choice, my son.” The Prince and the girl get married and live very happily. But…still something else, looks like the King often goes to visit our Dark Fairy after that. Lol he's fallen in love with her.
Yes, here is the real end of the story….all with a happy ending.

Thx for all comments ^^

[bird-e]

Po_Ta_To,

You wrote a wonderful bedtime story.

Cara

[Susann]

Great bed time story. Now you need an artist to do some pictures for it!

[pamissou]

great story po, more please

[Bella]

great job po!

[Mortux]

Great! And even the dark fairy gets something too

[nuj]

a good one

[Lord St John]

lolll Po....i loved your funny commentsa s well